Comments for Black Hat Magick http://blackhatmagick.com Not your ordinary detective agency Thu, 17 May 2012 14:50:22 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 Comment on Chapter 10 – Cakewalk Tango (Part III) by Mr. Caterpillar http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-10-cakewalk-tango-part-iii#comment-205 Mr. Caterpillar Thu, 17 May 2012 14:50:22 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=178#comment-205 Paragraph five: "pervious year" --> "previous year" Paragraph eleven: Extraneous quotation mark appended to the end. Fourth-last paragraph: "afterfive p.m.at your local time" it's the space-eating monster again! Story's great though! Paragraph five: “pervious year” –> “previous year”
Paragraph eleven: Extraneous quotation mark appended to the end.
Fourth-last paragraph: “afterfive p.m.at your local time” it’s the space-eating monster again!

Story’s great though!

]]> Comment on Chapter 10 – Cakewalk Tango (Part II) by Kyt Dotson http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-10-cakewalk-tango-part-ii#comment-190 Kyt Dotson Fri, 04 May 2012 17:38:38 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=176#comment-190 Thanks for the point out, Caterpillar... I don't know how these keep slipping past me (I wish Word wouldn't cite place names and kill the spaces also.) Thanks for the point out, Caterpillar… I don’t know how these keep slipping past me (I wish Word wouldn’t cite place names and kill the spaces also.)

]]> Comment on Chapter 10 – Cakewalk Tango (Part II) by Mr. Caterpillar http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-10-cakewalk-tango-part-ii#comment-189 Mr. Caterpillar Fri, 04 May 2012 17:09:40 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=176#comment-189 Only one Word mess-up this time. First paragraph, near the beginning of line 4. Only one Word mess-up this time. First paragraph, near the beginning of line 4.

]]> Comment on Chapter 10 – Cakewalk Tango (Part III) by DocClaw http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-10-cakewalk-tango-part-iii#comment-187 DocClaw Thu, 03 May 2012 15:02:06 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=178#comment-187 It seems as if you skipped part ii. Loving the story so far It seems as if you skipped part ii. Loving the story so far

]]> Comment on Chapter 7 – Turnabout is Fair Ambush (Part I) by Natalie Kimble http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-7-turnabout-is-fair-ambush-part-i#comment-185 Natalie Kimble Thu, 03 May 2012 04:44:26 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=114#comment-185 Yes! Finally someone writes about technology. Yes! Finally someone writes about technology.

]]> Comment on Chapter 10 – Cakewalk Tango (Part I) by Mr. Caterpillar http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-10-cakewalk-tango-part-i#comment-181 Mr. Caterpillar Tue, 01 May 2012 02:00:14 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=174#comment-181 Word is at it again. Second paragraph: "Arizonanative", paragraph 9 "around2 p.m.in". Together, we'll defeat the space deleting bug! Word is at it again. Second paragraph: “Arizonanative”, paragraph 9 “around2 p.m.in”. Together, we’ll defeat the space deleting bug!

]]> Comment on Chapter 6 – Maneuvering for Advantage (Part II) by Kyt Dotson http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-6-maneuvering-for-advantage-part-ii#comment-168 Kyt Dotson Fri, 20 Apr 2012 01:46:20 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=87#comment-168 Just to let you know, I'm going to be working on editing up chapter 10 - 12 shortly so you've picked a good week to burn through the beginning. I know it pauses abruptly; but I apparently needed to Nsit down and make sure that the plot works in all the right directions. If I can get those chapters properly edited this weekend, they'll start up again next week like clockwork. Just to let you know, I’m going to be working on editing up chapter 10 – 12 shortly so you’ve picked a good week to burn through the beginning. I know it pauses abruptly; but I apparently needed to Nsit down and make sure that the plot works in all the right directions. If I can get those chapters properly edited this weekend, they’ll start up again next week like clockwork.

]]> Comment on Chapter 5 – Cheaters Do Prosper (Part II) by Kyt Dotson http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-5-cheaters-do-prosper-part-ii#comment-167 Kyt Dotson Fri, 20 Apr 2012 01:44:45 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=82#comment-167 Heh, thanks. I am personally terrible at statistics -- but I am trying my best to keep the terms and usage proper. At least until I start using poetic license. Heh, thanks. I am personally terrible at statistics — but I am trying my best to keep the terms and usage proper. At least until I start using poetic license.

]]> Comment on Chapter 6 – Maneuvering for Advantage (Part II) by K http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-6-maneuvering-for-advantage-part-ii#comment-166 K Fri, 20 Apr 2012 01:44:13 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=87#comment-166 Ok, scratch the part about the bit of my brain that is dedicated to statistics. This is tripping all of my numbers nerd aspects, and it is well written. :) Ok, scratch the part about the bit of my brain that is dedicated to statistics. This is tripping all of my numbers nerd aspects, and it is well written. :)

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 – Encrypt Thyself (Part I) by Kyt Dotson http://blackhatmagick.com/weblit/chapter-1-encrypt-thyself-part-i#comment-165 Kyt Dotson Fri, 20 Apr 2012 01:42:06 +0000 http://blackhatmagick.com/?p=17#comment-165 Book one (which I should already get into e-book form because it's not coming back in Wordpress form) involves Elaine Mercer discovering a strange magickal effect on ASU campus that seems to be causing people to vote for Emily Early for student council president. She hires Elaine to determine who is doing this -- basically cheating in her favor to make sure she wins the election against her opponent -- and potentially stop it. If only because it's weird and involves stalkeresque messages of gratitude and adulation. Book one (which I should already get into e-book form because it’s not coming back in WordPress form) involves Elaine Mercer discovering a strange magickal effect on ASU campus that seems to be causing people to vote for Emily Early for student council president. She hires Elaine to determine who is doing this — basically cheating in her favor to make sure she wins the election against her opponent — and potentially stop it. If only because it’s weird and involves stalkeresque messages of gratitude and adulation.

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